Neil Emmanuel Fernandes
My patron, my everlasting light,
You, which transpires a razor of the piercing star.
You, that battles the unknown shade,
Pre-eminent darkness of the strange shadow.
Overcoming the unknown umbra of the following darkness.
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You are the glowing star of the night,
Guarding me upon the mischievous dusk.
Accompanying me within the evil power concerning,
The significant eternal eclipse.
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Glowing upon me like a star so bright.
The defeater of the twilight,
Leading me over the immortal light.
Great writing Neil. Deep and profound thoughts about a thing as mundane and extinct as a lamp.
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Well written poem Neil. Congratulations on your first publication. Eager to read more from you.
Great job on your poem Neil. Love the descriptive use of words. May the light guide you always. Keep writing.
Wow Neil, you have elevated the little lamp and given so much light to it. Congratulations Neil.
Beautiful poem Neilđ keep it coming.
Wow Neil. May you defeat every twilight and darkness in your life and shine bright like a star.
Excellent Neil.
Amazing .Keep writing Neil. God Bless
This is very well written! Good job Neil! âşď¸
Great Neil.. my little Neil is a poet.. may you shine like the light.
Congratulation.. will be eagerly waiting to see many more..
Good job Niel. May d lamp lead your path.
Way to go Neil!
Keep sharing your pearls!